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Offline Snovind

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peice of an hammer

on: October 03, 2007, 05:54:07 pm
It was first intended to be a axe
I`m really happy with it so far.


wip animation


The hammer so far

Please C&C
« Last Edit: October 08, 2007, 01:08:07 pm by Snovind »
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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #1 on: October 03, 2007, 06:43:18 pm
May be just me but I think there is an inconsistent light source, the handle is dark at the bottom, but the hammer head is light on the same side o.0 IMO make that bottom part of the hammer the darkest.
She's not guarding right now, she's just holding a thing to pass along to her husband warrior and then go do the dishes and change the diapers on the snake-babies.

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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #2 on: October 03, 2007, 09:27:51 pm
Update


I`ve fixed the light source (hopefully)
and added some more detail to the handle
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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #3 on: October 04, 2007, 02:24:16 am


Add some darker spots where two cracks meet. It will give it more depth.

And the yellow on the stone is not needed.

Try making it less straight. Make it look used. With chips out of it, stuff like that.

The handle looks pretty good.

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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #4 on: October 04, 2007, 07:28:55 pm
Uppdate




Did some small changes and made it less straight
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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #5 on: October 04, 2007, 07:34:29 pm
The hammer looks like it could fall apart. Maybe make the cracks lighter in the middle. That might help it look more put together.

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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #6 on: October 04, 2007, 10:41:05 pm
uppdate
reduced the amount of cracks


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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #7 on: October 05, 2007, 09:32:43 pm
sorry for double posting, but I got an update
Got some help on the pixeljoint forum

« Last Edit: October 06, 2007, 05:49:15 pm by Snovind »
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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #8 on: October 06, 2007, 05:13:17 am
Looks better, the palette change was a major improvement. I think you need to fix that handle. Where the handle meets the stone shouldn't be shown. There should be a shadow or something.

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Re: Hammerfall

Reply #9 on: October 06, 2007, 01:42:03 pm
sorry for double posting, but I got an update
Got some help on the pixeljoint forum


I like this version much more, it doesn't look like the hammer is going to fall apart anymore.