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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #10 on: September 26, 2007, 08:54:33 pm
 :blind: i forgot there was a T there for a second.

Yeah, make that more pronounced.

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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #11 on: September 26, 2007, 10:40:32 pm
Fanx!

NED, ARNE! (Means ARNE, DOWN! in swedish.)
Haha, that sounds kind of ambiguous! Even because of that I'm about to leave the font as it is. . . except the unfortunate a.





How does it look now? Will it do the trick? ;)
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #12 on: September 27, 2007, 01:31:47 am
imo the T has been a pprobably from the beginning, it's just gone from necorine to necarine
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #13 on: September 27, 2007, 03:31:02 am
Just putting some more yellow around the intersection...and kinda towards the top of the "t" would do wonders for legibility.  :y: Very ace otherwise--I prefer the cyan, magenta, and yellow one to the orange, yellow, and black one.
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #14 on: September 27, 2007, 06:39:22 am
That fruit on the left looked like an O to me when I first saw it.
The first image read, onecorne. ???
Nice job though. T needs yellow, The first N looking like a V a little.

Man that still looks like an O to me.  :blind:
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #15 on: September 27, 2007, 09:22:37 pm
Thankies, so here we go again:



Man that still looks like an O to me.  :blind:
Oh, no. . . no way! ;)
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #16 on: September 27, 2007, 09:45:53 pm
That reads just fine to me. Congrats.

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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #17 on: September 27, 2007, 09:55:20 pm
yes, now it is great!

i still wouldnt mind the t being mroe defined, but right now it is defined well enough to show clearly.
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #18 on: September 27, 2007, 10:42:27 pm
Yay! :) Thank you, guys! Enough, I'm posting it on the Nectarine boards! ;)
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Re: nectarine juice, or a CGA demoscene logo

Reply #19 on: September 27, 2007, 11:12:15 pm
really nice wordart, looks very smooth especially with only 3 colours.
since all the issues have been resolved, there isn't much left to say other than good work.

Oh, and even tho this isn't one, it makes me think of ambigrams, how you've got the letters quite unique in composition, some letters seemingly connect while the T is almost part of the background, that type of stuff is done all the time with ambigrams so you will read the word one way, and not pick up(too much) on the fact that it can be flipped around
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