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Offline Hatch

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It's a Head

on: August 27, 2007, 02:04:09 am


Mmf. Having trouble with the lips. I also don't know how to make it not boring.
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #1 on: August 27, 2007, 04:13:40 am
I think you used one too many colors when you did the shading on the back of his head.  Three maybe even two shades would be good.  Also i think this piece could really benefit from some good old fashion dithering. Plus i don't really see much of a problem with the lips but thats just my opinion.
The ear need work  :lol:
« Last Edit: August 27, 2007, 04:15:23 am by Phlox »
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #2 on: August 28, 2007, 12:20:44 am
The only thing I did with this piece was change the shape of the ear:


Now it has a Lobule, and a Triangular Fossa.  :crazy:
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #3 on: August 28, 2007, 12:22:01 am
Sorry to tell you Ornust but your edit makes it look like he has an ear growing where is temple is...
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #4 on: August 28, 2007, 01:12:12 am
Quote from: Souly on August 28, 2007, 12:22:01 am
Sorry to tell you Ornust but your edit makes it look like he has an ear growing where is temple is...

Oops, it does.


The problem now is that it looks like the ear has light going straight through to the other side, radiating off of the skin.
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #5 on: August 28, 2007, 01:20:32 am
Ornust that looks kind of worse.
I reshaped and shaded the ear a bit and dithered maybe a bit too much but i think the ear is in the right place just needs to look like it has a lobe.

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Ornust your first one kinda looked like he had this guys ears: http://alumni.imsa.edu/~data/images/autographs/shimmerman.jpg   :lol:
« Last Edit: August 28, 2007, 01:29:33 am by Phlox »
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Re: It's a Head

Reply #6 on: August 28, 2007, 03:35:59 am
Now not as tired as I was, I see the error of my huge, misplaced ear. I've probably learned something about proportion from this thread.

But do you think that the human head is that rough? I mean, come on.. look at this guy!

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