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Flying Ship :O

on: November 11, 2005, 03:51:48 pm
Hello pixelers ,
Here is a small ship scene I made yesterday and finished today
It got 7 colors , and I may add the aa and other stuff later , it took 2 hours .



Im quite happy about how it came out But something is missing ...
C+C is welcomed .

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #1 on: November 11, 2005, 05:01:22 pm
the pixeling is very good, but the lineart isnt done too well. the ship has some pretty jagged outlines, and the wood planks wouldnt go straight but would follow the form of the boat

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #2 on: November 12, 2005, 01:05:13 am
I love the clouds and the coloring.  It's hard to tell that's a ship though.

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #3 on: November 12, 2005, 09:01:52 am
thank you both .
Im sure that what u both said about the lineart isnt a ship one .
I tried to fix it and here is the result



Im happy now with the whole desgin .
Also i add the aa .
thank you

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #4 on: November 12, 2005, 12:27:32 pm
Hi :) The art its good but i miss something. i think it is the background..erm the blue area. its to empty, if you could do more clouds in the backgrund, i made an really quick edit/exampel:



Just to show you :) And you see, its getting more dept and a good fantasy feeling

And i have these ships i made for some time ago:



i hope it will help you :)
« Last Edit: November 14, 2005, 08:13:16 am by Coner »

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #5 on: November 12, 2005, 01:16:33 pm
i agree with coner, the background is too bland

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Re: Flying Ship :O

Reply #6 on: November 12, 2005, 01:41:00 pm
Thank you conner , you have a good point about that background .
But Im trying to get the ship shape right . Ill study some Ships and then edit this later
also Ill try ur clouds .