I'm getting some eyes on this in early stages because I intend to finish it soon. Don't mind the ghost image, I know it's there.
What it is: A basketball player jumping high to block a shot overhead.
My issue: This isn't quite getting the punchiness I'm trying for.

My plan is to put some twist in the body on the "hit" of the blocking motion. And while the landing sticks, I'm not sure how I'm going to make it feel more alive.
Thanks for any input.