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ISO Bunny

on: July 13, 2007, 11:24:22 am
Here is an ISO bunny i am making for someone just out of pure niceness. C+C to the max please, I'm sure i can take it....



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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #1 on: July 13, 2007, 02:10:03 pm
wow looks nice, but it looks a little chubby. his arms and feet dont have nay claws either. looks like an evil bunny with its green bug eyes.

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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #2 on: July 13, 2007, 09:45:13 pm
Cool. Shading is off...where is the lightsource?

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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #3 on: July 15, 2007, 04:08:07 pm
Top left.
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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #4 on: July 15, 2007, 04:59:08 pm
That leg's more lit up than anything, which strikes me as odd, considering it's on the end that should be a bit darker. His face ought to be at least as well lit as the leg is.

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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #5 on: July 15, 2007, 05:00:36 pm
It's a good start, but you can easily make it look more like a bunny by adding a few more details. Try to shade it more like something round. Your bunny is made out of lots of round shapes. Let it show. Also, the ear should cast a shadow on the body. I upped the contrast and changed its color to white. You can keep your gray if you want to, just try to add some more color to the palette to make it more interesting. Also, its head isn't shaped much like a bunny's. I changed the nose a bit, too.



Things I didn't change in the edit is the tail, which is much too big, and it should be less round. Like mentioned earlier, its paws doesn't have any claws. You don't need to draw the claws themselves, just make the paws a bit less round.

I hope that helps. :)

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Re: ISO Bunny

Reply #6 on: July 15, 2007, 05:33:27 pm
AAAAAAHHHHH thanks so much for the feedback guys. I am going to update now. :D Thanks again!
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