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A creature(very WIP)

on: July 10, 2007, 08:10:03 pm
I havent posted anything here in a while, so here I go.

Here is what I have:

Any thing look wrong before I start?

It will be in the same style as this: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/22555.htm


Thank you!
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #1 on: July 10, 2007, 09:00:04 pm
Well...the lines haven't even been completely cleaned up yet...
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #2 on: July 10, 2007, 09:18:16 pm
Quote from: Zero on July 10, 2007, 09:00:04 pm
Well...the lines haven't even been completely cleaned up yet...

I dont think that its important to completely clean them up. I just want to know if theres any more details I should add.

Edit: Heres a better version:
http://i179.photobucket.com/albums/w293/skeddy13/pixel%20art/creature2lines.jpg
« Last Edit: July 10, 2007, 09:31:03 pm by skeddles »
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #3 on: July 10, 2007, 10:26:42 pm
hmm...the eyes seem like theyre mis-placed. the left one especially...also the toes have very little difference or depth. othan that...its okay. really weird looking  :lol:
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #4 on: July 10, 2007, 10:52:17 pm
Cute little creature ;D He seems a bit flat and stiff, though. Don't be afraid to use more curves. :D His horns aren't quite symmetrical. Wait, now I see, you drew his head turned towards us, but the angle of the horns makes it look as if he faces in a different direction, making one of his eyes seem oddly placed. I did an edit to make it more consistent.

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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #5 on: July 11, 2007, 02:23:15 am
Quote from: Arachne on July 10, 2007, 10:52:17 pm
Cute little creature ;D He seems a bit flat and stiff, though. Don't be afraid to use more curves. :D His horns aren't quite symmetrical. Wait, now I see, you drew his head turned towards us, but the angle of the horns makes it look as if he faces in a different direction, making one of his eyes seem oddly placed. I did an edit to make it more consistent.



Thank you sooo much, that helped a ton!
Im making some progress, but theres still a lot to do. Sleep time.
« Last Edit: July 11, 2007, 04:09:06 pm by skeddles »
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #6 on: July 13, 2007, 04:25:45 am
- Give him some arms ;D
- front eye a bit bigger than the other
- photobucket's converting your bmps to jpegs. use png. added bonus: your files'll be smaller.

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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #7 on: July 13, 2007, 02:07:59 pm
use xs.to its a great image hosting site. looks great by the way. just needs some grays for his horns.
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #8 on: July 13, 2007, 09:41:41 pm
I'm not sure how to fix it, but the left horn (his left horn) seems out of perspective.
like it's facing us.
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Re: A creature(very WIP)

Reply #9 on: July 13, 2007, 11:48:29 pm
Quote from: halu on July 13, 2007, 09:41:41 pm
I'm not sure how to fix it, but the left horn (his left horn) seems out of perspective.
like it's facing us.

a little shading/lighting should do the trick.
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