AuthorTopic: [WIP] Hi, beginner here, I'm stuck dealing with grass in my scene.  (Read 1015 times)

Offline Arieth

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Hi, I'm a bit of a newbie and I need help with a WIP scene I'm working on. I'm not sure how to draw grass here in a way it looks good. I've tried to do a more "uniform" and "tile-esque" style of grass, and also a more "flat colour" with some patches of grass distributed along the ground, but I'm not able to get a satisfying look. It's really frustrating!



« Last Edit: April 11, 2020, 03:12:59 pm by Arieth »

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Bruh, at least post your image so people can easily see it without having to do extra work, c'mon now sonny. HEAD IN THE GAME.



Grass. The quintessential pixel artist's rite of passage.

GO find some reference you DOOFUS. Grass has been done to death.
Check out Slym's take on it:



Thus far, you're not drawing grass. You're just scattering around little leafy plants here and there.

See that repeated jagged edge texture everywhere? Kinda makes layers or waves. Try copying how Slym does it and see what you learn. Patches, clusters of grass. Subtle variations in value and hue.

You might start by taking your bands of vignette shadowing at your treeline and see if you can break up those perfectly smooth banding edges with a grassy looking texture. Right now, those perfectly smooth unbroken bands of shadow are telling us - 'hey this surface is completely smooth, no grass here'.

Do it. Don't make me end you.
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Bruh, at least post your image so people can easily see it without having to do extra work, c'mon now sonny. HEAD IN THE GAME.



Grass. The quintessential pixel artist's rite of passage.

GO find some reference you DOOFUS. Grass has been done to death.
Check out Slym's take on it:



Thus far, you're not drawing grass. You're just scattering around little leafy plants here and there.

See that repeated jagged edge texture everywhere? Kinda makes layers or waves. Try copying how Slym does it and see what you learn. Patches, clusters of grass. Subtle variations in value and hue.

You might start by taking your bands of vignette shadowing at your treeline and see if you can break up those perfectly smooth banding edges with a grassy looking texture. Right now, those perfectly smooth unbroken bands of shadow are telling us - 'hey this surface is completely smooth, no grass here'.

Do it. Don't make me end you.

Honestly I tried to post my image with the command but it kinda didn't work? Sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you for the advice! I'll update as soon as I do the grass and finish some animations.

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When posting images from an external host, make sure you use the URL of the image itself, not the webpage it's on. Then it'll work.

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Usually grass doesn't exist like that in the woods.
The forest floor is typically leaves and branches of brown or black with moss or grass patches sitting on top.



So start with a brown base.
Add lighter brown dead leaves.
Then grey stones sticking in the dirt.
Then add the green growing here and there on top of it all.
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Everyone's making good points, but there are a million and one ways to attack grass.

Honestly, with a cartoony style like this, I think areas of the same colour don't necessarily look too bad at all. Yes, you can break it up with patches of earth and variations in grass colour, and yes, where one shade meets another (or where grass meets another object, like a bush) you can add grass and leaf shapes to the edges to give more texture. And those things will help a lot. But you don't always have to fill every bit of the image with loads of texture.

You've got some hard shadows on your characters. Adding shadows to the plants in your grass might help too. Also, leaves have a crease from tip to stalk, so it looks more natural if you divide them vertically with shading, as opposed to horizontally like you do here.

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A small update here. I got two versions of the grass here, and I don't know which direction is better, so I'm posting both to see your opinions. Thank you all for your time!



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Despite what I said, the more grassy version looks more lush. Make sure whoever is developing this is OK with the multiple layers and complex shadow work you'd need to do. Looks like it could get hectic.

There might be a middle-ground between the two, I dunno.

So. Who has the time to put shadows under individual blades of grass?

Me, apparently. I've applied some simple shadows to grass in the middle section



And a little shading on one or two leaves. I just noticed that most of your light is coming from the opposite direction to my edits, because I'm an idiot. Still, it is what it is. If you like the effect you know what to do. If not, it still looks good. You've got a good aesthetic going on IMO.

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I prefer the less cluttered first one because it would be simple to implement into a game.
But, if you are just making a one time scene, the second intricate one is better.

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Pretty much.