iso Pokemon stuff (Red, Seth/Wes, Ash, and Mirror B's wip head)

[Luminous_Reaver]

I gotta sprite some buff guy so I can show how much more I know about anatomy though.
Lately when I do fan stuff I feel like I'm dragging myself down. The next thing I do has to be original.

Anyways I'm really not liking their right arms, but I don't know how to work it out.
Seth's cloak thing's flap things are also bugging me, but I don't know what's wrong with them, and um
here's some things I used as references:
FireRed, Seth/Wes, and Ash's Hoenn clothes

I've been told Seth has some readability issues, but I'm not sure I believe it.
(Then again I drew it so I know what every thing's supposed to be)

[Luminous_Reaver]

Okay, Mirror B's done.

[Malor]

To me, all of them besides Ash have readabilty issues.

[Luminous_Reaver]

Could you explain why you think so? I thought Ash was the worst. 

[Malor]

Well.. I think the hair is too...busy? on the toehrs, especially Seth. And the colors blend together to much..although Mirror B is fine..

[Xion]

I, too think that the A & B sprites are cluttered, but Red seems pretty awesome to me. Ash is cool, too, but the pants have a line going across the knees...? And afro-man...Well, he look-a like-a banana.

[Shori]

the line across the knees is part of the pants's design. ;x
I've got nothing new to add, c+c-wise :<
I think they look good