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Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

on: June 09, 2007, 11:27:46 pm
dont know where im going with this piece. pureley emotional output in pixel form, nothing else.
comments and critiques welcome.
Blue.

obviously a wip.

Love.

( comments and critique welcome but i dont think ill be going any farther with this piece)

male fighter:

female fighter:

all obviously wips, and most likely discontinued.
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Re: Blue.

Reply #1 on: June 09, 2007, 11:45:29 pm
Nice to see something a bit different from you. (Pot calling the kettle black or what!)
Although it isn't really to my taste. The arms and legs seem very short, and I think it would all come together better if the wisps of smoke that become the reaper stemmed from the gap between his hands rather than his hips. Would seem more ritualistic, and less like the brain child of an emo.

You need to darken the bill of the cap somewhat, because at the moment the cap isn't reading as well as it could/should.

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Re: Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

Reply #2 on: June 10, 2007, 12:30:49 am
Wow, I really like were the 1st piece is going.

Id have to agree with faceless, the smoke that rises to become the grim looks akward and would look better if they started between his hands

And hmm, would that person in the cap be you by any chance, I see a vague resemblance
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Re: Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

Reply #3 on: June 10, 2007, 12:37:16 am
faceless: ritualistic? thats not really what im going for. i agree that the legs are too short, and will fix, but the arms aswell?
flame: yep, alas im the little person in despair.

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Re: Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

Reply #4 on: June 10, 2007, 07:24:33 pm
faceless: ritualistic? thats not really what im going for. i agree that the legs are too short, and will fix, but the arms aswell?
flame: yep, alas im the little person in despair.

Aw there there *back pat* I like "love" but I don't understand what she is holidng... You should finish the fighter...well both of them..
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Re: Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

Reply #5 on: June 11, 2007, 12:39:42 am
you never showed me that first one  :mean:  Looking forward to seeing it refined.

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Re: Blue.[ ryu's pixel dump thread]

Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 01:22:25 am
malor: love was based on a pencil sketch of mine, shes just holding her hand close to her body, not particularly holding anything in particular( it looks much better in the sketch)
jww: you know i love to hold out on you.