[WIP] iso character

[RosenCrantz]

Hello all, I have started to make iso character sprites, i'll show you the progress  :

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updates and critics ? pleeeaaase ^^
Please don't make too long sentences, i'm french 

[Zee]

The 2nd one's neck is out of proportions, to his head. And the legs are... well I don't know but something is wrong with em.

[Krut]

Hey man:

I think his right arm is too long compared to the other one, make his red/right arm longer and i would pull the shoulder a wee bit towards the torso.
Ill make an edit if you need me to.

I  like how you made those legs like petite/short-er stylized, i would dismiss the second version alltogether, the first is looking sexy  .

-Krut

[RosenCrantz]

The 2nd one's neck is out of proportions, to his head

it isn't his neck but his shirt

[Zee]

Then his collar is huge.

[RosenCrantz]

Then his collar is huge.

completly   

[Zee]

Well, I'm not sure that'll work, but I can't really say much until you actually make the character.

[RosenCrantz]

step 3 : (just a little apdate to have a better iso view)

[ndchristie]

you have set yourself isometric guides - follow them.  you've drawn a character that doesn't even pretend to follow the perspective of the tile.  It's an easy mistake to make on some things, like eyes or hands , but it doesn't look like you even considered it from the start.

[RosenCrantz]

Il me semble que vous etes français, d'apres le blog sur le developpement de votre jeu partisan tactic battle, alors si je permets de vous demander de me la refaire en français car j'ai un peu de mal avec l'anglais (jai que 14 ans alors vous pouvez comprendre mes difficultés), merci !

[PippySaid]

J'adore le premièrement, cest tres bon jusqu'ici. J'adore les petits jambes beaucoup 

[RosenCrantz]

J'adore le premièrement, cest tres bon jusqu'ici. J'adore les petits jambes beaucoup 

French is not compulsary, I have asked adarias to speak french because he is french  ^^

[ptoing]

Afaik Adarias is American.

Translated by a french friend of mine:

What RosenCrantz wrote:
As it seems, you are French, according to the dev blog of your game "partisan tactic battle", so may I ask you to tell me that again in French , because i'm not that confident with english (i'm only 14y old, so you will probably understand), thanks !!!!

What Adarias wrote:
Tu t'es déterminé des regles de travail en isometrique : alors respecte-les. Par exemple, le personnage que tu as dessiné ne montre pas la moindre volonté de suivre la perspective de tes blocs iso. En général, c'est une erreur qu'on fait aisement sur certains détails, commes les mains ou les yeux, mais dans ton cas, je dirais qu'à aucun moment tu ne t'ai posé cette question.
 
(Par ailleurs, je ne suis PAS français, je ne parle ni n'ecrit français. C'est un ami qui m'a traduit, pour que je puisse te répondre.)


Also, this is an international forum and it would be nice if everyone would at least attempt to write in english here.

[RosenCrantz]

Also, this is an international forum and it would be nice if everyone would at least attempt to write in english here.

OK i'll try, but it's difficult for me becauise i'm 14 and french, so excuse my english

adarias < of course I have try to make an iso persective on my character but I think it's very difficult and if you can explain me how you make your iso characters, i'd like to know, please 

And special thanks to ptoing and his friend for the translation