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Offline Boraka

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[NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl

on: January 07, 2020, 08:02:35 pm
Hi there!

I'm working on a poster for decorating my new home!

I would like for you to critique it, and point some things you think can be improved.



From my point of view, the weaker part of the image, at the moment, is the "alien" thingy in between the thitghts, it is supposed to be a facehugger-like creature, but I am not sure if it can be read very well, also, I don't know how to make it better ???.

I was thinking in give it a "retro screen" feel also, with a finish like this:



Any thoghts are welcome!

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Re: [NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl

Reply #1 on: January 10, 2020, 05:35:00 pm
you could give it more of a segmented look, i think thats how facehuggers generally look,
also found the rectangle background a bit distracting, made it darker:

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Re: [NSFW] [Nudity] [CC] Vaporwave girl

Reply #2 on: January 14, 2020, 09:24:05 pm
Thanks a lot for the feedback!

I did an edit in the creature, and hopefully is so much better now, thanks for the suggestion  ;D



Regarding the background, I agree that is distracting because is very busy, but that was kind of the aesthetic I was going for. In any case, I will think about maybe changing the pattern or the colors, but trying to keep it kind of the same line.

Any other feedback is very welcome still.

Thanks again!