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Crux+scraps (now pixel dump thread)

on: May 12, 2007, 07:55:48 am
I'll get to that kraken in the future, I have no work ethic.  Blah.  Until then, anatomy help?

still really rough, just figured I'd see if anyone had some anatomy fixes before I took it further.

And random scraps:


1.  Low color, geometric lookin' experiment.

2.  Random spaceman made out of boredom.

3.  15x19 pieces, nothing special.

4.   Nervous salesman.  More boredom.

5.   Made for a chemistry presentation.

6.   Crabs using  alternate palettes.  And some pokemonesque creature pixelled after a friend drew a random shape during class and I transformed it.

7.   Greyscale piece made back when I was in graphic design.

8.   Face made with the mspaint default palette.

9.   Spongebob characters, might incorporate them in a scene later.

10. Mini-kraken made to be used as a secret emoticon on LoBD.

11. Face, continued boredom.
« Last Edit: February 18, 2008, 06:20:07 pm by Cure »

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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #1 on: May 12, 2007, 01:15:20 pm
The crucifiction peice is looking really neat. The head, to me looks a little large and the leg to our right, seems a little thin comparied to the other. I like the random peices, especially 1,4, and 5.
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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #2 on: May 12, 2007, 03:45:24 pm
one concern about the crucifi(x)ion is that he feels more like he is leaping than hanging; some weight would go a long way for that.  head is also large.  the rest (as rough as it is) looks good so far, wont have any other crits until some specifics show up
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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #3 on: May 12, 2007, 04:40:40 pm
Wow, you really are getting quite good.  I like number one, but why on earth did you use that one curved line?
The Spongebob sprites are also very well done.
And nice job on the MS Paint default face thingy. 

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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #4 on: May 12, 2007, 07:54:24 pm
Fak:  Thnx.  I was playing around with #1, when I do finish it, I'll lose the curve.
Adarias:  Good point, I'll try to do that.
Malor:  I do believe you're correct about that leg.

MORE SCRAPSSSS:


and some portraits for a possible Ensellitis game, with an mspaint default version of the hooker:

« Last Edit: May 12, 2007, 10:02:29 pm by Cure »

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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #5 on: May 13, 2007, 10:24:33 am
they all look like zombies =/  put some color into the peoples faces lol...

as for the other thing, s cool, but it just doesnt do anything for me.
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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #6 on: May 13, 2007, 12:45:54 pm
they all look like zombies =/  put some color into the peoples faces lol...

Whaa? They're bright brown with pink cheeks!

Your stuff is frigging awesome Cure, the style, technique, colours, composition tis all pro. Most of the time at least.. You shouldn't smoke though, or you'll get trapped in a volcano, lose your hair and turn green  :-*

With the crucifix thing, i think his legs are too small. I have a thing with drawing big legs, but i do think his are a little too on the small side.

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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #7 on: May 13, 2007, 05:45:39 pm
Only crit is the beard on the sailor still looks phoned in to me, compared to the meticulous detail in his and the other char's faces.  Awesome stuff, really fun and stylish, good progress!

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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #8 on: May 13, 2007, 09:26:52 pm
Cure, I absolutely love the color choice on the first piece under MORE SCRAPSSSS--straight up RGB  :y:

I think all of your stuff is pretty good...the only real general critique I can point out is that it seems like you don't go all-the-way with your pieces; you get right next to done and stop, it seems.  A bit of refinement here and there, an all of these would be extremely amazing. 

But good nonetheless.  Can't wait to see some more stuff.
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Re: Crucifiction+ scraps

Reply #9 on: May 17, 2007, 03:21:29 am
Fak:  Thnx.  I was playing around with #1, when I do finish it, I'll lose the curve.
Adarias:  Good point, I'll try to do that.
Malor:  I do believe you're correct about that leg.

MORE SCRAPSSSS:


and some portraits for a possible Ensellitis game, with an mspaint default version of the hooker:



Very nice work.  :)

With the green guy, I'm having trouble reading the form on the left (our right) nostril, it has a different lightsource to everything else.

That said, I think you should try drawing different kinds of noses, I got into the habit of always drawing similar noses and it was a hard habit to break. :yell:

What's with the red noses?  :P