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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #50 on: February 28, 2010, 09:31:49 pm
:D
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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #51 on: May 12, 2011, 02:16:54 pm

 Here is some rough line art, i want to see what everyone does with it. Enjoy, i cant wait to see what comes from this.

hey, errm, I've colored it. I hope y'all like it.



I know it isn't Good or anything.. and that's because I'm new to pixeling.  :D

its perfect

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #52 on: May 14, 2011, 09:25:41 pm

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #53 on: May 14, 2011, 10:14:03 pm
Man that's trippy.

AAAHH ONE-LINERS don't worry i'll delete this post maybe

oh can you delete this post?

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #54 on: June 13, 2011, 03:56:29 pm
This is my first attempt at pixeling (based on dixet_4). Please critique.

--Piffany
Disclaimer: I am still fairly new at pixel art, so please don't be offended by my negative critiques :)

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #55 on: July 10, 2011, 08:46:43 pm
This is my first attempt at pixeling (based on dixet_4). Please critique.



I like it, good palette and overall shape.
The pose looks a bit unnatural, even for a robot ;)
I think it's the way the leg to the right bends.. It's like his leg is sliding towards the other and he's about to fall to the right.
For a stable pose I think the foot should point more towards the left and the leg shouldn't bend so much inwards.

Also, try adding some subtle rim highlights to the left on his "chest plate" to make it pop more.
And personally I also like to use slightly brighter outlines "inside" the sprite.

(couldn't resist playing around with the sprite)



1. Original
2. Adjusted the pose
3. Rim highlights and softened the black outlines "within" the sprite.

EDIT: Oh sorry, I missed that the line-art was someone else's.
Oh well, my critique still applies. :P
« Last Edit: July 10, 2011, 11:04:02 pm by Seiseki »

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #56 on: November 09, 2011, 12:22:18 am
Looks a bit camp to me, looked like he was mincing with the original arm position. :P

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Re: The Line Art thread

Reply #57 on: September 09, 2013, 08:18:58 am


Arachne: ...I don't know whether to be terrified or...even more terrified, but those are awesome lines.

Weak attempt