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Offline Arghus

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[WIP] No man's land.

on: April 25, 2007, 03:24:21 pm
I'm currently busy making a scene of no man's land from World War 1.
I just need some critics and comments.


Thanks,
Arghus.

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Re: [WIP] No man's land.

Reply #1 on: April 25, 2007, 06:44:29 pm
i think what you have is successful, but it is hard to say with so much empty space.  do you plan to make a full drawing that aligns to tiles, or do you plan to make tiles that actually repeat themselves?
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Re: [WIP] No man's land.

Reply #2 on: April 25, 2007, 08:17:21 pm
So far, it looks interesting, I'd definately like to see more.
No real crits at this point.

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Re: [WIP] No man's land.

Reply #3 on: April 26, 2007, 02:14:02 pm
i think what you have is successful, but it is hard to say with so much empty space.  do you plan to make a full drawing that aligns to tiles, or do you plan to make tiles that actually repeat themselves?
The tiles were originally intended for organisation, as I was doing this with a friend.. but when I got the grid finished, he didn't want to participate anymore.
I'll keep working on it, thanks!

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Re: [WIP] No man's land.

Reply #4 on: April 26, 2007, 06:10:02 pm
I like it so far, and would like to see more, but I think it's hard to get a good feel on what it looks like since the background it such a stark white.