AuthorTopic: Struggle Away! [Minor WIP]{UP-Again!}  (Read 6281 times)

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Re: Struggle Away! [Minor WIP]{UP-Again!}

Reply #10 on: April 26, 2007, 03:51:03 am
i think you need fix four point
i do nothing about he pose exspression, but you have little problem in the anathomy.
pls look this

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Re: Struggle Away! [Minor WIP]{UP-Again!}

Reply #11 on: April 26, 2007, 09:35:48 pm
It's looking pretty sweet, but the head looks a little to small, Bers edit is nice.
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Re: Struggle Away! [Minor WIP]{UP-Again!}

Reply #12 on: April 26, 2007, 10:12:57 pm
Bers' edit is amazing, as usual. I was going to say as I was scrolling through your steps that the arm that Bers corrected really looked too broken up into the separate muscles/regions and looked... disconnected. Even with Bers' edit, the upper region where the shoulder is still looks disconnected. I would suggest trying to get more of a graceful curve going on along the upper edge of that arm.

The head is a bit too small, I agree, for the body. I also think the little bit of muscle at the bottom left (our left) of his torso should be trimmed a little. The area around the elbow on his right arm needs to be changed. Here's what I think it should look like, but I could be wrong:



The hand on the same arm I edited also seems off to me, but I'm sure someone else could address it better than I.
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