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Re: DUMP OF ECK'S UNFINSIEHD GARBAGE

Reply #10 on: May 06, 2007, 02:57:28 am
done with the lady.

tomarow if i get time, ill work on
a)finsihing the cow
b)someone elses lines.
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Re: DUMP OF ECK'S UNFINSIEHD GARBAGE

Reply #11 on: May 06, 2007, 05:17:02 am
Good thing you're trying to finish stuff, it's what separates serious artists from doodlers, in my opinion.

However, i think the bird and lady still look unfinished. Mainly, the bird's jacket doesn't follow the shading style and depth of the head, and the feathers are just rushed :P
The lady's lower dress also looks unfinished (and you should go quickly check some references for the folds), you need to keep a consistant lightsource throughout (specially on the hair ), and the hair's AA makes the lines look broken and noisy. Ditch the black lines and the pillow shading around them. Also, try to keep your lines fluid, there's a lot of broken looking lines on your pieces (and the AA isn't helping much, practice that too - ONE THING AT A TIME IS EASIER. DO IT FOR INSTANT XP INCREASE).

ALSO HER BUT IS SHOWIN

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Reply #12 on: May 06, 2007, 08:16:39 am
ALSO HER BUT IS SHOWIN

i know, isnt it awasome??

ok, thanks for the crit.  it has become quite apparent to me that aa has becoma an issue.  i actually have been told that by a runescape pixeler.. now thats embarassing...  :-[
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Reply #13 on: May 06, 2007, 09:01:51 am
because my aa sucks, i felt the need to improve it.



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Re: DUMP OF ECK'S UNFINSIEHD GARBAGE

Reply #14 on: May 06, 2007, 09:17:13 am
I love the butt-showing dress. The shading on it is very good.

The lines could use some tweaking, they're too dark and at places too thick and jaggedy. Especially the lines on the hair, there's better ways to shade hair I'm sure.


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Re: DUMP OF ECK'S UNFINSIEHD GARBAGE

Reply #15 on: May 13, 2007, 12:28:02 am


he had a dick once, but a prostitute bit it off.

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i baked ilkke a cake for his birthday.  my aa needs work.



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