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Offline Ensellitis

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Black Hole/Sydney fanart

on: March 29, 2007, 01:10:22 am
I wanted to get more opinions, suggestions, etc on this:


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its a gift to istvan and also a comp entry over at pj.  there is a back story that isnt done on why they are staring off into to space like that, which will come later.

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Re: Black Hole/Sydney fanart

Reply #1 on: March 29, 2007, 02:20:57 am
I'd suggest losing the dithering in the window. For such a smooth surface, dithering may create the illusion of rough texture. Unless it's supposed to be a dusty, or muggy window. Still though, I'd lose it.
In fact, I don't recall iSTVAN ever using much of the dithering technique. I believe his style was more flat, and simple. I would also try fattening up the black hole character, as he's not usually the fittest of super heroes. Not huge, just a wee bit chunky...and bulge, definitely need the bulge...Great interpretation any how...
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