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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #10 on: March 14, 2007, 01:51:49 pm
Made a poor/fast edit, just to show how you could go with the objects, to give them more "life", in this case, the bed.
« Last Edit: March 14, 2007, 01:54:56 pm by SolidIdea »

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #11 on: March 14, 2007, 06:57:23 pm
*jumps up and down*
SolidIdea that is awesome! Exactly what I needed someone to show me!! I love you!

And thanks for the tips everyone *edits more*

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #12 on: March 14, 2007, 09:43:11 pm


I thought the walls looked a bit plain, so I added a wallpaper pattern.  And pinki-fied it for fun!  I just thought it looked too much like a boys' room.  You don't have to do any of this, it's more like my suggestion than a critique.

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #13 on: March 14, 2007, 09:49:54 pm


I thought the walls looked a bit plain, so I added a wallpaper pattern.  And pinki-fied it for fun!  I just thought it looked too much like a boys' room.  You don't have to do any of this, it's more like my suggestion than a critique.

...You've just killed me with all the pink. Though now since you did this suggestion you might as well add the addition color change to the bed, because now it currently is out of the color scheme because of the wall change.

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #14 on: March 15, 2007, 01:57:13 am
Okay I edited ... a lot... any better? Or any other tips on things to fix?  :lol:
(and Serena you were very right, it needed to be more girlie XD)

« Last Edit: March 15, 2007, 02:02:18 am by abzdragon »

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #15 on: March 15, 2007, 02:05:03 am
Well a few, why is there a computer monitor and no keyboard, mouse, CPU, or chair? Fix the floor if your going to make it into a rug, by adding speck details. Better job on the bed.

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #16 on: March 15, 2007, 02:27:15 am
Mb bc it's a flatscreen TV >_> or something like that...
And it's not a rug...


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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #17 on: March 15, 2007, 04:40:46 am
wow, drastic improvement.  I disagree about needing specks on the floor - maybe add an actual rug for some accent value but I think, especially for this style of iso, you can get away with a smooth floor like that.  nobody is going to look at it and be confused about whether or not its carpet!

However, I think you need to show that flatscreen monitor the same love that you put into the other stuff - its lighting seems arbitrary compared to the other elements, and its color ramp is very blah, especially compared to the bed and walls.  The screen's bevel looks thicker on the left, and the dark areas don't seem dark enough on it.   The diagonals on the screen don't make too much sense either, as LCD screens aren't generally reflective; maybe you could squeeze a little icon or something in there instead?  personalize it, instead of just letting it be some weird furniture display prop ;)

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #18 on: March 15, 2007, 04:53:12 am
As per your suggestion Adam I gave the screen some life:
(can you tell it's a heart?)

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Re: Iso Room and Sprite

Reply #19 on: March 15, 2007, 08:37:24 am
lightsource suggests top right.  I think those shadows need re-positioning.

big improvement though.