I love the steam effect you got there, and the palette is lovely and warm. Almost cozy.
What did you use as the source material for the E-Tank? It seems to be missing the distinctive upper and lower lips, and the bands you've added are unevenly spaced, giving you less room to develop that iconic 'E'.
https://tinyurl.com/yxva4k8gI like how Pistachio handled the "falling over" issue, but another way to get a dynamic effect could be by using exaggerated perspective and foreshortening.

Here's a *really* rough edit (sorry, I only had a lunch break and I'm just starting out myself) with shiny black coffee, those lips and a bigger, more centered E. I'd like much more time to refine the top and improve the tilt a bit, but I hope you get the idea. My style is a bit more diagrammatic and less cartoony in general, so this was hard work.
I also love Pistachio's shine and drips! And your rework is looking fiiiiine!