[WIP] Platformer game

[Shori]

So, I've finally decided to register and post some of my works.
I've been browsing for quite awhile ;(  This forum has some of the best pixel work I've ever seen on it.

Shori, my namesake character:



The beginning of the animation is just there to show how I slowly went from the android 'skeleton' to the full fleshed out character.  Now that I've adjusted how he's standing and the like, I'll make a new skeleton for him, and from that more poses.  ;(  I'm still working on tidying up the shading on this sprite, however!

And yes, I know about the forum's zoom feature.  Just a habit to do 2x size, I'll reupload in a bit <_<;

And as for the 'game' bit, Shori's a character in the game.  I'll be posting quite a few of the character sprites here for comments and criticism ;(

[ceddo]

Less saturation on the pants would help, and maybe a dark outline to make him stick out from the future background.

[InvaderLupus]

Here's a quick edit I did:



I desaturated the pants. I also upped the contrast all around, and added more shading to give him more depth. Also eliminated a color on both the shirt and pants.

[Shori]

Not terribly fond of the changes that you made, other than the saturation :p

edit: Changed and reuploaded
Edit: And again:
Changed the shirt
Andddd minor edits + armor.
sleep time !