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Re: Za

Reply #10 on: March 03, 2007, 06:30:18 pm
Needs some better timing as you already said so youreself. I love it though, great style, excellent colours.

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Re: Za

Reply #11 on: March 03, 2007, 06:42:25 pm
looks like its hugging aggresively.

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Re: Za

Reply #12 on: March 03, 2007, 07:19:38 pm
really reminds me of Evangelion. Which is never a bad thing.

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Re: Za

Reply #13 on: March 03, 2007, 07:45:56 pm
really reminds me of Evangelion. Which is never a bad thing.

I knew I saw it from somewhere :-\.

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Re: Za

Reply #14 on: March 03, 2007, 08:32:29 pm
It doesn't look like flexing.
I concur.
looks like its hugging aggresively.
I concur.

I think flexing would be like striking more of a pose. Hold the most strained position for a second and maybe make his face change to a strained expression, with like, wide eyes or maybe a roar. It also looks wierd that he's lunging forward. I'd say a more "flexy" pose would be one with a straighter back.

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Re: Za

Reply #15 on: March 04, 2007, 02:31:32 am
The animation looks like something a boxer (fighter) would do. I'd make the "hugging" movement more stiff and trembled, like the Hulk (tv) did. Showing anger and fierceness.