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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #10 on: March 01, 2007, 12:33:15 am
Your rock has defined shapes, but then each defined edge fades into the green mass. I think you should think about where you're placing your rocks better, rather than what you've done which appears to be making a shape, and then thinking about details later on. It is too reminiscent of a crumpled up piece of paper, to me.

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #11 on: March 01, 2007, 03:26:04 pm

Less random?

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #12 on: March 01, 2007, 05:09:57 pm
I think Sherman Gill made a nice one...although I think he would do better in a more fire orange coulor.

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #13 on: March 01, 2007, 10:05:59 pm
Well the only edit sherman made was on the character.

I was asking how the rock was looking. :P

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #14 on: March 01, 2007, 11:42:21 pm
It's obvious that my characters awesomeness spread onto the rocks. Or he was referring to the character. Or something else.

Anyway, the small rocks that are defined mainly by their highlights, they seem unbalanced. Particularly the second highest one. I recommend you removed the dark outline on the top of them, and maybe just use the second darkest blue?
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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #15 on: March 01, 2007, 11:49:41 pm
I meant that you should unify the shapes, make them into larger more understandable rock structures.
Something like this:


Except cleaner.

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #16 on: March 02, 2007, 11:42:46 am

Just had time to work on one of the rocks, but I think I'm starting so get what you mean.

I'll see what I can do.

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #17 on: March 05, 2007, 04:22:59 pm
Update!

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #18 on: March 05, 2007, 04:24:13 pm
I think the blue spots aren't really putting that much of a effect on it.
And add some lighter colours or organic ones.

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Re: Hide and Seek

Reply #19 on: March 05, 2007, 04:34:26 pm


I've deffinitly got to stop with my dithering.
I have no idea how to do it.
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