obesity.

[Xion]

I'd like to see you try cloth.
Well, I third the statements against the head. Looks like you crowded the "eyes" in and now they're really close together. I think it'd be cooler if the eyes were on opposite sides of the head, like a horse or a fish. Then have a long, slobbery toung loll our of his mouth and drool on his moob for extra disgust.
I really like the background so far reminds me of a subway station.
I also ditto the dislike of the fade to white at the bottom of him. It seems so forced.
Why do his moobs have such brighter hilights than anything on his belly?

[Ryumaru]

bab: ive extended his arms outwards and think it helps alot, thankyou. i dont know if ill add definition to the legs, there already massive, i dont think theres a need for definition.
xion: maybe something like this? i like it, almost comical in my eyes.

[Xion]

Haha, yeah like that sorta. But the slobber looks more like veins. Or an upside down tree. And the tongue is bent in such an odd way that it would be more fitting if you didn't make like it was supposed to be resting on his chest but instead just like hovering there all nastily or something.


Ack! Just looking back on some of my posts I realize how many spelling errors I've made. I gotta fix that.