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Offline bmatrix

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[WIP] Little man

on: February 23, 2007, 04:41:06 pm
Hello,
It's my second pixel work. What can I change? I'm waiting for suggestions.

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Re: [WIP] Little man

Reply #1 on: February 23, 2007, 04:56:14 pm
Does it float in the air like a ghost or is the robe touching ground, hiding feet? Place a shadow underneath to indicate the distance from the ground.

The face in itself is quite nice, but the blobby neck makes it kinda hard to picture what the body under the robe is like. It's essential at least for the creator to know what's under the robe, in order to make some sense of the whole thing. The right shoulder is missing..? I'd also introduce some other colours in the palette, now it's just shades of brown.

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Re: [WIP] Little man

Reply #2 on: February 23, 2007, 06:01:31 pm
I did shadow and I'll try to do a shoulder. As for colors I wanted to limit them so I used only shades of brown. Some remarks about lighting?