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Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

on: February 20, 2007, 04:14:04 am

My personal character, I thought about giving him a guitar... Just felt like spriting him, too. ( Also, I didn't try at all on that guitar, I was just throwing my idea on there )


I just finished this, trying to conserve as many colors as I could.

Hope you like them, C+C if you feel like C+C'ing.
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Re: Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

Reply #1 on: February 20, 2007, 04:16:04 am
Looking good man. But to me while your first character is all proportioned correctly the second characters head looks abnormally large for his body? Unless this was supposed to seam that way.

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Re: Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

Reply #2 on: February 20, 2007, 04:18:21 am
Looking good man. But to me while your first character is all proportioned correctly the second characters head looks abnormally large for his body? Unless this was supposed to seam that way.
It was meant to be kinda chibi.
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Re: Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

Reply #3 on: February 20, 2007, 04:23:14 am
In that case it looks awesome.  ;D

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Re: Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

Reply #4 on: February 20, 2007, 11:20:10 am
In that case it looks awesome.  ;D
Thanks~

Anyone else have any C+C for them?
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Re: Two things I was wanting some C+C on..

Reply #5 on: February 20, 2007, 02:11:09 pm
I have a bit of critique, mainly concerning the anatomy of the first piece (the guitar guy). I made an edit, which I hope you're cool with:



One major thing is that figure seems too stiff. It's strange, because your second piece doesn't seem to suffer from this so much. In fact,, despite the chibiness, I think the second piece is far more anatomically accurate (as far as such small pieces goes, anyway). I moved the legs and arm into a (hopefully) more natural, relaxed position. I think the arms, too, are a bit too short, as I lengthened them by a couple of pixels. Otherwise, I think the main change made was to the palette. I unified it a bit, reduced the colour count, upped the contrast, etc. Since you were leaning towards the whole "blue shadow" thing anyway, I went ahead and made it more prominent. Oh, and I straightened the guitar a bit.

I'm generally a fan of small pieces, and I like these quite a bit. I just think they need a bit of tweaking here and there, and they'll be pretty great. Good stuff.