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[wip] rpg portrait - troubles

on: February 19, 2007, 11:47:55 pm
Hi.
I'm starting on some portraits for my rpg.  This one is Art, my main character.  I'm having troubles with his eyes so far.  Anyone mind editing please?

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #1 on: February 19, 2007, 11:58:04 pm

Here's a quick one.Mabye it'll give you some ideas.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #2 on: February 20, 2007, 12:01:32 am
kind of but to me, it just doesnt match.  thanks though.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #3 on: February 20, 2007, 12:08:53 am
I like this piece, very moody!

I don't know what kind of personality she has, so... idk.
Tried different approaches...
"Baboy" is Filipino for pig.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #4 on: February 20, 2007, 12:32:44 am
he,  and thanks, I like the last a lot.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #5 on: February 20, 2007, 12:35:29 am
It's a dude? Might wanna give him a sharper jawline and thicker eyebrows.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #6 on: February 20, 2007, 12:46:06 am
mind trying to show me?  this is probably my first portrait of anyone other than myself, and from those of myself, they never did turn out very good.
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« Last Edit: February 20, 2007, 12:50:45 am by Joseph »

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #7 on: February 20, 2007, 01:12:55 am
To me it looks like he smelled something bad. You should make the neck darker.

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #8 on: February 20, 2007, 01:50:19 am
the neck is only temp.  what do you mean by the way he looks?  how could I fix that?

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Re: [wip] rpg portrait - troubles

Reply #9 on: February 20, 2007, 02:36:03 am
heres my wip on Jennie-a girl


edit:
lol, I think its horrible...  any ideas?  she isnt supposed to be so goth looking...could someone try to make her kinda sexy?