forest mockup

[JWW]

been workin on this for the past couple of days, and i think its pretty much finished.  It's for a game project on a pretty tight deadline, so more mockups soon. Thanks to badassbill and david for critiques.

[Cow]

Woah, that's pretty pretty.

I dunno if you want critiques, since it's finished, but I think the tree is kind of... out of perspective. The leaves work, but the trunk seems to be, like, straight-on with the camera, almost. Besides that, the character is also super-tiny in comparison to the rest. If that's intentional, disregard that.

Yeah. Cool. 

[JWW]

thanks mccow.  The character size won't change, but can you show me what you would do to fix the perspective of the trunk? it looks ok to me.

[Cow]

Since I'm incredibly lazy, and the same issue has come up before, I'll just direct you toward's Jad's example:

from this topic: http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=2623
 

[Vale]

Your color choice is excellent. The are so vibrant. The only problem I can see is the tree perspective which has already been expressed.

[JWW]

im shortening the trunk and making roots in the back to remedy this.  Thanks for the comments =)

[Joseph]

I agree with the trees but wow dude, you've really improved.  i'm in love with this piece of art!
I love the rocks too, very "helm-ish" looking.
Fantastic work, can't wait to see this finished.

[JWW]

thanks joseph =)

update, shrooms and tried to fix the tree. probably didn't work.

[Joseph]

it helped, but needs more.  I like the shrooms a lot too.  you're becomming my next inspirational artist.

[ZoSo]

freaking awesome... Kinda reminds me a bit of Secret of Mana 2, you should make the sprites more in that style to, would look wicked. Keep it up, rock on!