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Re: Reworking it, don't bother commenting atm [WIP]

Reply #10 on: February 12, 2007, 07:26:14 pm
You *are* getting better, but I'm not sure you should focus a lot on 'deformed beast'. I mean a few pieces are okay, just don't get stuck in that sort of vein, I don't think it serves as a good place to be in terms of learning anatomy and texture and coloring and so on. You should be paying more attention to anatomy and construction rather in attempting (bravely though, I give you that) interlace dithering over everything.

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Re: Reworking it, don't bother commenting atm [WIP]

Reply #11 on: February 13, 2007, 09:28:57 am
Thank you Helm. I have now decided to go for a fighter sprite instead, to work on my anatomy:

Only the lines yet, any critiques on the anatomy so far?

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Re: Fighter [WIP]

Reply #12 on: February 13, 2007, 04:25:22 pm
Well... lots. But why not buy an anatomy book and learn that way? I swear it's better than people editing you on the internet.

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Re: Fighter [WIP]

Reply #13 on: February 13, 2007, 07:01:32 pm
Ah, I will do that. Do you have any recommendations?

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Re: Fighter [WIP]

Reply #14 on: February 13, 2007, 07:05:14 pm