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Pixelator Entry

on: February 07, 2007, 07:16:44 pm
Yes, you have probably seen it:

Since Helm, Snader and Ryumaru were all positively surpised by my entry, I think it will be a good experience to push it further.
I might make it somewhat bigger, add a back ground, add bigger legs for certain, and some more detail. All other pixel art
I'm working on currently will be on-hold till I get this done, since I think this could give me experience I do not want to miss out on.
Any comment is apreciated.
« Last Edit: February 07, 2007, 07:19:34 pm by Opacus »

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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #1 on: February 07, 2007, 10:26:30 pm
Legs fixed?

(Well, not completely fixed yet, need help on those ugly feet.)

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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #2 on: February 07, 2007, 11:20:27 pm
You have some lightning issues and it needs more contrast.
Here's an edit:

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The palette is good but you need to put it into better use at some places.
I've noticed that you tend to break lines although your palette has a nice transition colour for those cases.
Does scaling an image blur it?
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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #3 on: February 08, 2007, 12:01:05 am
I think for the tail to look more correct, it should be placed a little farther to the left and downwards. Also, maybe some more shading at the base would help it fall into the background more, since the piece uses such a perspective.

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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #4 on: February 08, 2007, 08:32:31 am
Let him be the original colour and add some muscles.

It will look freakishly awesome.

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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #5 on: February 08, 2007, 06:47:12 pm
The legs look like he's trying to do a split. Here's a suggestion for the legs:

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Re: Pixelator Entry

Reply #6 on: February 09, 2007, 08:56:15 am
I loved your entry :) I like Luzeke's edit on the legs.