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Offline madartiststan

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[WIP] New Shirt

on: March 14, 2007, 08:57:46 pm
This is my second shirt. After all the opinions on the first one I wanted to change it quite some bit and I've been working hard on it. Except I hate my highlights  :'(!

C+C Is very much welcome as I have major issues with the way it's looking.

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Ah, I know see what you mean. I took a bit of time to bump up the contrast and saw how extremely odd the wrinkles and folds looked. Thanks. I think it's looking better already.


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The sleeves are bothering me a bit but I think it's looking good.  ;D


Also, thanks Adam for the kind words. :D
« Last Edit: March 14, 2007, 10:06:17 pm by madartiststan »

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Re: [WIP] New Shirt

Reply #1 on: March 14, 2007, 09:01:55 pm
up the contrast first man!

your folds are looking a little unrealistic but it was probably hard to see it because your contrast was so low.

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Re: [WIP] New Shirt

Reply #2 on: March 14, 2007, 09:32:12 pm
MASSIVE IMPROVEMENT!  Could definitely use some more contrast, but this is like...600x better than your first one.  Keep at it!

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Re: [WIP] New Shirt

Reply #3 on: March 14, 2007, 10:40:46 pm


I was wondering what you'd all deem more appropriate. The grayscale or the purple?  ??? I think the purple looks better myself.
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Re: [WIP] New Shirt

Reply #4 on: March 14, 2007, 10:47:29 pm
If you're going to do the purple, I'd take the saturation way down... ouch >_-