Vespa...*Things...*

[vellan]

agreed with helm re: female traits.

love the style.

[Terley]

I think the detailing makes the femininity, I wouldn't go too far with reshaping this character but a little shape always helps.. It reminds me of Noodles from Gorillaz.

[Feron]

i thought the original pallette was more feminine.  heres an edit (i was messing around with the hair lol, just look at the body!)

[Gnarf]

@helm/vellan - i don't know, there's not much room for thinner legs, and the poncho-like shirt makes it hard to show much curves.


The best I came up with is this.  Though, the breasts look very unnatural, almost like it's just a shirt design.

@terley, not bad, but the hips (in my opinion) don't change the appearance at all.  in fact, i didn't notice them at first.  what does everyone else think?

@feron, should have mentioned that the shirt doesn't seperate for each arm; it's more of a towel over the upper body (like a poncho.)  she does look more feminine though.

thanks for the edits/crits so far.  i'm beginning work on the vespa, while still working on this.

[Xion]

Yeah, I didn't realize it was a chick till I scrolled down and saw one of your posts. (Yeah, that's right, I didn't read the first post.)
I like the poncho and all, but a more femenine pose would help break up the symmetry that you said you didn't like. Like...what was that thing mentioned in another post...? Contra Pasta? (j/k, contraposto). Yeah, that would, IMO, give her a much more femenine and charactual character.
Also, where are the breastseses?
Also, the crowbar bugs me. I think it should curve back right before it snaps forward in it's classic shape. More like the hair does here.
Like a crow's foot.
Thus the name.
Also, I didn't realize it was her hair at first; I thought it was a scarf.
I like the style so far.

That's alot of "Also"s.


Oh, woo, you posted.

Well, the brestseses don't really have to cast shadows like that. There could just be the implication that they are beneath the cloth by way of either hilight or like, those stretchy horizontal lines you see in busty womens' shirts. (Not that I would know.  ))

[Feron]

go back to the original shirt color - looks more feminine.

[Sherman Gill]

With a poncho, the shape wouldn't really conform to the breasts of the woman. The cloth would be pushed out, but it wouldn't turn concave. So there would be highlights, but not shadows (Atleast not like in your picture.)

[Opacus]

 
(Completely ripped from Scuba Steve, yes)

[Stwelin]

Hot.

[Helm]

Girl?