hey
This is looking to be very nice.
Well I think dreams can tend not to make much sense, or be quite quirky and such, and kinda shift between different things/focuses. So I was thinking maybe you could have it shifting from one dream to another, or from one focus to another, or something simular. Hmm, I do think it might be quite a challenge todo such a thing though.
editI got some pretty crazy ideas here... maybe a giant flying chicken in the background? and a tornado with a shift in the perspective of the clouds? as to show a fear of heights? Hehe, I think these would be pretty tricky to pull off

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Hmm, it's kinda a bit tricky to know, without knowing a bit of background about the character. What is he afraid of? What sorts of things does he like todo? What is currently going on in his life? I dunno :\.
cyas