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Fat Demon Thing

on: January 26, 2007, 10:49:21 pm
First post... Heres a thing I made...
[img=http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6857/fatdemonthingyfx6.th.png>http://[/img]
Any suggestions?
« Last Edit: January 26, 2007, 10:56:53 pm by JJ »

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #1 on: January 26, 2007, 10:56:52 pm
Use the button to show your image ;)


Here it is :

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #2 on: January 26, 2007, 11:00:21 pm
Thanks! So... Any comments?

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #3 on: January 26, 2007, 11:07:08 pm


The image wont work.  :hehe:

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #4 on: January 27, 2007, 12:21:59 am
yeah i tried like 10 variations on that URL, I can't get jack to load.

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #5 on: January 27, 2007, 12:25:30 am
I guess it was fixed.  :P
« Last Edit: January 27, 2007, 04:18:47 am by cryssy »

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #6 on: January 27, 2007, 12:59:37 am
Whoops! Actually, from my computer, my try is the only one I can't see. What would a "better location" be? I'm using imageshack.

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #7 on: January 27, 2007, 09:27:32 pm
Try Photobucket

Imageshack usuall works fine for me, though I think this site has a problem displaying .pngs, which your image is.  Dunno, hope that helps.

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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #8 on: January 28, 2007, 01:20:31 am
For some reason my brain seems to REALLY like that..... O_o Aaaand why hasn't anyone commented on the picture? You've all been commenting on how the picture was posted.....
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Re: Fat Demon Thing

Reply #9 on: January 28, 2007, 12:11:02 pm
I'm far from being good but I can point a few flaws in the piece :

-Never ever use blakck outlines inside the sprite
-Use more contrast on the horn palette and less on the brown one
-Since there is too much contrast on the brown palette, the dithering looks obvious and useless
-Your AA is not correct, here is a quick example of how it should be done (left  : yours ; right : correct AA.  Still you should not use pure black)
   (zoom in to see the difference)
-There's an overall lack of texture :  is it made of rock ? fur ? plastic ?