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Offline MoyArt

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MoyArt PixelArt [WIP]

on: January 31, 2007, 05:18:34 am
Hello guys, my name is MoyArt and this is my first post, it would be great if you could give me your comments, i have read some PixelArt tutorials and this is my first attempt, it would be great if you could give me some advice to improve  ;D.




Greetings!!
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Re: MoyArt PixelArt [WIP]

Reply #1 on: January 31, 2007, 06:10:14 am
Needs more contrast. Better if you don't use a white background. Forearm is too short.
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Re: MoyArt PixelArt [WIP]

Reply #2 on: January 31, 2007, 06:48:22 am
His left arm is looking very funky: the triceps is too pointy, and the forearm is curved. The hand also needs some work too (too small). And I agree to more contrast, and some hue change between shades.
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Re: MoyArt PixelArt [WIP]

Reply #3 on: January 31, 2007, 09:09:13 am
His forearm is bending like 90 degrees! Look at his elbow and follow the line to his hand. Yeah, darken some of those values. You can't see any of your details as it is.
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