Harpy

[Stwelin]

I agree with faceless. You added more shadows to the wing in the background, try the same with her left talon. the talons also look a bit large to me, a bit girthy...

[Froli]

Mangust already made a great edit, but I made some small adjustments to your originals left talon to correct it a bit.

In different view + darkness

[9_6]

Thanks for the replies.

@mangust: Your edit was very helpful.
I've always wondered how to pixel convincing wings and have finally come across someone who showed me how to.
Thank you =)

@Faceless&Stwelin: Ok I've made the right talon darker and made them a bit thinner.

@Froli: I see what you mean.
I've pushed those pixels upwards.

here's the new version:

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[dragonrc]

Edit of your harpy, did something with the foot, the leg and her breasts.
You may think: 'Wow this helped'
You may also think: 'get your hands of my sprite'
I hope this helps;)

[mangust]

I'm glad that I helped you. But about her neck is a little bit broken  Edit this and you'll get nice pixel!
Anyway it's picture is good work!