Insomniac Bunny's Revenge [WIP]

[Cow]

Nipples are way too high.

[Stwelin]

Nipples are way too high.

Are you telling me that your nipples aren't at your neck? ...weirdo.

[Malor]

 

That looks like bush's ears..o.0

on-topic- I am digging the bunny, the peice has really improved over time, I think it could use a few touch ups, such as making it look kinda like fur, since it's a bunny and all..o.0

[leel]

I don't really understand why the bunny is so ripped.. I think the face would be much more shocking on a cute little bunny body.  But that's just my opinion, I'm not really sure if this is an already existing character you're pixelling.

[Alucard]

To Stwelin - Noted and fixed
To Malor - I will see what I can add do...Maybe some hairy nipples   
To Leel - I never intented to add the body it first but than alot of assorted people suggested it and I just felt like it would do me so good so I could make sure I had learned what had to be learnt...Than I saw that drawing of my friend and started cracking up and at that point I know I had the perfect body...It was a beautiful moment...

I wont post my current version just yet since it has such small changes

I still need help with the arms though so I suggestions on that are still welcomed

[Alucard]

SUPER BUMP

I have returned to this project after a long hiatus and I am now ready to complete this


I have broadened out the shoulders and dropped the nipples a bit

I am getting help from both here and pixel joint so I hope I can finally complete this piece

-Minor Edit-

He needed a neck :3

[Alucard]

First arm is finally complete and it requires so proper shading

C&C on what I have so far please

[Sharm]

I'd drop the selout, at least for now.  It's distracting and seems to be making the lines more jagged.  The pecks look odd having an outline on the sides like that.  What are the muscles attaching to?  The shadows on the abs are weird.  You've got a cast shadow from the lines above, but none beneath, making them look like those slats to direct air where the heat comes out in a car.

He's a scary buff bunny, so I think you're pulling off what you intended. 

[philipptr]

actually after looking on this pic closely for a while, it seems to me you do AAing and the selout rather random. I mean sometimes you AA the outline, sometimes you use selout without AA.
Also your antialiasing seems pretty jaggy.



This picture shows:
1. Line without AA
2. How it seems to me you would AA it
3. How I would/A common way to AA it with one buffer-shade
4. How I would/A common way to AA it with two buffer-shades

[Alucard]

Quite true and I began to notice that after a while too but I was so focused on trying to get an arm I liked I never stopped to fix it 

I will do that now since I accomplished what I wanted to for the moment