AuthorTopic: Critique please  (Read 833 times)

Offline yrizoud

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Re: Critique please

Reply #10 on: January 11, 2019, 03:12:34 pm
I find the jawline a bit distracting. In the original 2-color version, the equally spaced pixels convey the idea of a continuous line that is thinner than 1 full pixel. Now if you add one color that is an intermediate, you have the ability to represent the thinner lines using continuous pixels of this color.
Here for example, this shows a "jaw"line that starts thin, becomes thicker (full white), thinner again, and fades as unattached pixels.

Offline falz

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Re: Critique please

Reply #11 on: January 11, 2019, 08:28:50 pm
Another little thing I would change is how the hair rests pixel to pixel with the back of the neck. Optically, it makes it look like the neck is protruding or connected with the hair.

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Re: Critique please

Reply #12 on: January 12, 2019, 06:47:56 am
Tried to make jawline as you said (also fixed neck)