Capitol Bulding

[mangust]

Paint and cut building of government - Capitol for our world.
tile system 32x16.



In there the scale of objects is not realistic and not constant. The porch has 3 different reduction scale - footsteps, first floor, second floor. If the scale not be such, then persons maybe looks at godzila and house borrow the big piece
In right side some tiles a gather, the pink line and field it's a base of tiles. The gather in map editor, greated for this project.
Maybe i am wrong about this and other fault? What you say people?

If anyone intresting i am put link on full map with there capitol (its big and not finalize)

[Joseph]

your language is very "foreign" sounding, especially since you don't know how to spell building, godzilla, etc., and what do you mean by "greated for this project"?

With the art, great work.

[Xion]

What does language or nationality have to do with quality of art? There are lots of people who aren't fluent in english but are awesome artists.

I think these are awesome, and the amount of detail is wonderful. No crits from me.

And I think he meant "Created for this project."

[Feron]

something's fishy about this topic... your language is very "foreign" sounding, especially since you don't know how to spell buidling, godzilla, etc., and what do you mean by "greated for this project"?

perhaps the most ridiculous thing i've heard all year.

Awesome job.  can we see it all put together without the transparency?

[Panda]

something's fishy about this topic... your language is very "foreign" sounding, especially since you don't know how to spell buidling, godzilla, etc., and what do you mean by "greated for this project"?

That was totally uncalled for.
Really, you should think before posting and accusing someone (esp, if you have no proof at all), with comments of a racist nature. Language fluency or spelling perfection and place of birth/nationality doesn't matter with what one can do art wise.
You just earned yourself a strike, 2 more and you are out. You've been warned.

As for the tiles, they look neat. So much detailed packed into them.

[mangust]

something's fishy about this topic... your language is very "foreign" sounding, especially since you don't know how to spell buidling, godzilla, etc., and what do you mean by "greated for this project"?

Yes, you right, "my english is very bad and.... fishy....". It's funny )))). Crits are welcome. I must more learn this language (and i will do this), exactly, but more or less people clearly what i want say, this is above all.
And, of course, it's my work )) I put more works some later for this project.

You just earned yourself a strike, 2 more and you are out. You've been warned.

Maybe not too severity? This man is not offend me, its just crits, maybe not appropriate, but without round oath.
Though, you a know more about rules.
Anyway thanks for you comment and help!

And to all people, thanks a lot for defend me! Much appreciated.

And I think he meant "Created for this project."

Yes you right and thanks.

Awesome job.  can we see it all put together without the transparency?

Of course. It's image a part of map.
This building of government be on the square of city, and havn't more trees around (as white house and other), because on square a not many place for this. Maybe is not right things, its can change, i'am think on this.



wait you comments... about all on this image.

[Rerg1]

Great work.

You add a great deal of detail to your art. What is this for?
And I don't think anyone cares how you spell but I defenitly thinks your art makes up for it.

Where are you from?.

[Squeez]

Wowowo excellent work! I like trees

[mangust]

Great work.
You add a great deal of detail to your art. What is this for?
And I don't think anyone cares how you spell but I defenitly thinks your art makes up for it.
Where are you from?.

Thanks! It's for some java on-line world (style: real-life) with casual games.
I am from Russia.

[Rerg1]

I should of looked at the architecture more.
The lamps should have a white spot in the middle and on the edges to give it more of a glow effect.
The grass could be more of a simple continous colour but now it looks like one part is weedish. ( No Offense).

[mangust]

I should of looked at the architecture more.
The lamps should have a white spot in the middle and on the edges to give it more of a glow effect.
The grass could be more of a simple continous colour but now it looks like one part is weedish. ( No Offense).

About lamp you right, its test variant and that i will be fix, necessarily. Need paint another lamp, nevertheless that a bulding of goverment. ))
For grass - maybe remove chess order and added more piece with similar tiles. Make that more not uniform. But, if i understand you correctly, use one color for the tile grass is not right think, because grass have some texture and one color do it tiresome.

[Feron]

defintley remove the chess board effect, personally i'd say that whole area looks a little cluttered.  I think the lamps need a total revamp.  the building isself is beautiful though

[mangust]

defintley remove the chess board effect, personally i'd say that whole area looks a little cluttered.  I think the lamps need a total revamp.  the building isself is beautiful though

Thanks  . A little cluttered? It's because a on scene small objects or ...?
This house positioned on brink map of square, and before has some water basin and alley. But maybe you right and around this house it is not enough elements, fence, staircase in alley, statues and other... This need a consider.

[Joseph]

Lol, you're saying im racist?  I said nothing about his race.  I simply commented on his spelling and use of words asking where he/she is from...honestly, I don't see how in any possible way that is rude.
terribly sorry everyone for asking where hes from...

about the art itself:
assuming the light lamps are only temp the rest looks pretty nice.  I'd think the bottom walls would have a bit more shadow on top (because of the walls above)

also, heres a quick edit, hopefully it'll help you with your lightsource (which currently, doesnt make any sense to me)

[Dusty]

You didn't just ask where he was from, you said that his post was "fishy" because of his "foreign" language. That might not be racist exactly, but you judged him by his language.

Anyways, great art. It really does look sharp and detailed, especially with how big it is, you don't see that much in ISO, sadly. I really like how much you were able to do with just a few chunks of tile.

[Faceless]

It was racist in that he arrived at the conclusion that mangust didn't make this based on the fact that his langauge made him sound foreign.
There's no other way of looking at it.

Anyway, I think these tiles are very good, but I would like to see parts cleaned up with AA, and the checker board removed from the grass. Also, I think the lamp looks really out of place; very front on, and poorly detailed.

[Joseph]

I didnt say it was fishy because his language.

actually, nevermind, id rather not get banned from this forum for absolutely no reason.

[mangust]

To all people.... I think talk about language must be closed, because is does not matter. And there discuss about art, but not philological faculty.
I'm very glad if you like this art and thanks very much to all your comments!!!
I think Joseph is not racist, nevertheless. 

about the art itself:
assuming the light lamps are only temp the rest looks pretty nice.  I'd think the bottom walls would have a bit more shadow on top (because of the walls above)
also, heres a quick edit, hopefully it'll help you with your lightsource (which currently, doesn't make any sense to me)

For this edit. It's may be right, but for the tiles must be mirror flip on horizontal with Java's means. Because i may not paint another flip (use one tile house in two direction) it's decrease size of graphics for this world on half, almost. For on-line world, which his client upload from site, this means is very good. And this part of image include flip tiles, therefore have two lights,  it's not right in realistic art, but for this i must ignore this 
As a result the world haven't one source of light. It's ruefully, because he haven't shadow of object, only in itself tiles. But over this i may paint house and object with personal light and dispose his in the best view. Of course source of light can't differ vastly.
Now i think about this trouble light for this house.
If choose the optimal light (right img), i.e. flip not distort light - i lose intresting shadow from column on left img. Its crossroad.... ))

(Crits are welcome)

About AA... Yes, that's on building a not enough. I must work on this... But i don't have many time, unfortunately ((
And thanks for your edit, Joseph!

[Joseph]

too bad about the lighting...
this new piece is awesome.  it looks like the right side of the railing is over 1-2 pixels too far.  and then the bottom floor and basement windows arent aligned directly with the columns, looks like the far right column (the corner piece) is closer to the middle than the left.  good luck.

[Xion]

I think it's the middle column that's out of line rather than the windows.

[mangust]

too bad about the lighting...
this new piece is awesome.  it looks like the right side of the railing is over 1-2 pixels too far.  and then the bottom floor and basement windows arent aligned directly with the columns, looks like the far right column (the corner piece) is closer to the middle than the left.  good luck.

I think it's the middle column that's out of line rather than the windows.

If i right understand you.... I not see this earlier, thanks. Anyway, i think this is was better.

[mangust]

Paint some textures on roof.

Funny, if light on roof maybe frontal, but on other piece house is left top. It's very terrible or not?
Maybe it's look at no bad, if consider this building move on gorizontal?