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Offline lief

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tree & cave (wip)

on: September 27, 2005, 05:31:45 am





c&c on both please.

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Re: tree & cave (wip)

Reply #1 on: September 27, 2005, 08:15:29 am
Daeng you!!!

It should be llegal to be able to make such wonderful pieces of art! :D
Beautiful, Beautiful is all i can say!..

Even tried to find some errors in it, but can't find anything specific to critic mor then the dudes left arm (the arm on the right side from our perspective). The arm has light under it, wich looks a little bit wierd since the lighsource shouldn't be able to light there.

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Re: tree & cave (wip)

Reply #2 on: September 27, 2005, 09:17:54 am
Lovely tree! The dithering on the background is a bit too even, and i may be insane but the way the dithering stops exactly where the tree top ends makes it stand out too much. I absolutely love the uneven folliage .

the cave looks great too , but my screen is too dark to really appreciate it.

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Re: tree & cave (wip)

Reply #3 on: September 27, 2005, 10:59:42 am
the cave: I would darken the stones of the right cave entrance where the sky is brightest and instead illuminate the left side more. I think that would give it more balance and would make more sense imo. Other than that this one has some dense atmosphere! The tree is simply a fluffy beauty :)

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Re: tree & cave (wip)

Reply #4 on: September 27, 2005, 04:52:03 pm
Hey,
The tree looks great, but I can make a comment about the cave. If he's looking into the cave, maybe his eyes should be visible?
peace!

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Re: tree & cave (wip)

Reply #5 on: September 27, 2005, 08:01:36 pm
because eyes radiate with pure mystical laser power? one vote against showing the white of the eyes.

Personally, I think the cave one would be better with just one ramp of colours. Not yellow outlines for the person. Just unify the palette. But then again you know what I do with palettes, so consider the idea and the source