AuthorTopic: Mockup (Read 2337 times)

Scotteh · **on:** January 07, 2007, 04:05:46 pm

Totally bored

So I made this from ToTaL bOrEdOm

Kill it with Critiques Please

Delgneith · **Reply #1 on:** January 07, 2007, 04:20:54 pm

The highlights on the character's shirt look totally random and aren't doing much for the piece.
The outline of the character seems too light against the background. I suggest maybe trying without an outline at all.
If those are supposed to be coins they don't look very coin like. Try looking at some references of coins.
The face seems to have 2 buffer/AA shades but the rest of the body has none. This makes the style look a bit inconsistent.
The background and platforms confuses me. What is it supposed to be? Also why the double pixel highlights on the platform?

Other than that I think it looks like you got a pretty decent start. Something about the interface doesn't work for me. Maybe you could spruce it up.

Ryona · **Reply #2 on:** January 07, 2007, 04:32:02 pm

Delgneith pointed out pretty much everything, so I just wanted to drop in and say that your mockup is cute.

Scotteh · **Reply #3 on:** January 07, 2007, 04:55:38 pm

@Delgneith: I will try improve everything you pointed out

@Ryona: