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Re: Spray painter.

Reply #10 on: January 03, 2007, 03:24:44 am
Any further crits on the peice?
I'm thinking about trying to incorperate a background with this one.

Which colors do everyone like best?  ???

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Re: Spray painter.

Reply #11 on: January 03, 2007, 03:31:54 am
I prefer the green one. The green palette looks like he's wearing clothes, the purple one looks like he's wearing a costume.
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Re: Spray painter.

Reply #12 on: January 03, 2007, 03:42:55 am
I'm really diggin' that green one. I got a couple crits (though they are very small, and sorta a matter of artistic choice).
I think that the guy's facial expression is bored/depressed, and I don't think anybody who's tagging feels like that when they are doing so, instead, they are kinda nervous (gotta watch for them pigs  :hehe:).
Also, the spray coming out of the can looks very...messy, like its going all over and all coming out at once...I'd make it more of a funnel.
Again, just minor discrepancies; It's a great piece otherwise. Good job!
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