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[WIP] Need good C/c

on: December 31, 2006, 05:34:42 pm
Heya guys, i love the help i can get out of pixelation so i decided to post here once more. here is my WIP so far:



Am working on the fore ground first, then the mid, then the back. Feel free to Comment, ill be starting to color it today and any pallet ideas would be nice.
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Re: [WIP] Need good C/c

Reply #1 on: December 31, 2006, 05:39:53 pm
WUUN SCAPE ALERT.

This is going to be full of RS Posts. :(.
Anyway.

Good concept. Muscle look more dragon scaled(ish) than muscle.
And the left arm should muscle is to small.

MIght you be ChoasToas from Runescape Community?. Always wanted to help you with your Pixel Art.
Haven't checked RSC back a long time ago but most of your colouring on lines are pillow shaded.
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Re: [WIP] Need good C/c

Reply #2 on: December 31, 2006, 05:45:08 pm
yea i feel kinda embarrassed posing a runescape sig here but i need the help. And yea its me Chaos Tayoko form RSR, TIF, and RSC. I HVAE noticed all my works are pillow shaded and i want to avoid that on this one.
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Re: [WIP] Need good C/c

Reply #3 on: December 31, 2006, 06:38:24 pm
What's there to say at this point?  The piece is still in its infancy and there isn't a lot of critique to offer at this point besides the base lineart.  his right bicep seems a bit small, and his forearms have that "popeyesque" look to them (really fat compared to biceps), and his left wrist looks broken and could probably do with a straightening.

When you start colouring, then it will be easier to offer in depth critique.
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Re: [WIP] Need good C/c

Reply #4 on: December 31, 2006, 11:43:56 pm
Its probably a good time to get critique now becuase it will be easier to fix errors. I never studied anatomy like others here but here
is my attempt to fix up the anatomy of your guy. I think you should draw him naked first, then draw the stuff on him.

Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
http://www.artrenewal.org/articles/Philosophy/phi