The man with no face.

[Claredeth]

Or a body.
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I will add a background soon.  I did not look at any tutorials yet however.
Les anatomy in this style too.  Just rolling heads.

c+c

[Souly]

I don't know what it is I'm looking at. 

Looks kind of like a potato wearing a hat.
Doesn't really look much like a man.

[Claredeth]

Art is what you want to make of it.

[Souly]

Yes, but it's always nicer when it looks like what you're trying to make.
Which in this case I can't make out what this is.

[Claredeth]

Now that I tihnk of it, it does look like a potato.  Okay if you can think of anything other than the title to fix tell me.  And I have to go so I can not answer for a while.

[Opacus]

What's with that attitude?
The dude's giving you comment and you completely ignore it. Getting comment is the whole point of posting it here.
If you're not open for comment, don't post it.

[halu]

Seriously, you were being really rude, Souly gave you a good comment, and you just ignored it.
I didn't know what I was looking at either, I kinda of see a hat, or something, and then a white cloud looking thing...

[Claredeth]

I know what proper c+c is, I have been around many spriters for a long time.
In the way saying it looks like a potato he did not specify what to change.
Now....I can take c+c and freak out.  I am repling to his comment in a way that my art was strange.
Not one person gave me though any fixing ideas.

As for the last post, the cloud thing is my sig, A C formed into a D.
In fact tthat is a hat, A green baseball one in fact.

:/ C D \:

[flaber]

my fixing / suggestion idea
would be to start again
with an actual idea of what to draw, instead of just a random shape

[Claredeth]

Thanks, I really hated how this one turned out.
I will make a fix with a lot of changes.

My own sugestions are:

To maybe remove the hat or make it less unevenly placed.
Fix the color choice.
Add a mouth or a nose of some sort.
Or scrap the design and make his face a skeleton and some skin left.