Rabbit/Hare

[Scotteh]

Can't remember whos lines but still credit to them
Current:
C+C please and anything else

Edit: Blackeyes lines and changed title

[Tube]

too beaver-ish

the teeth dont make any sense for a dog.

[Scotteh]

Not my lines  Besides its supposed to be cartoonish I think

[Panda]

Are you sure it ain't meant to be a rabbit/hare? 

[Scotteh]

I dunno, i thoguht it was a dog with buck teeth but i might be wrong lol (waits for the person who created lines to come tell us)

[skw]

maybe just link us to the site where you found it? :)

[Rerg1]

Scotteh, I want to say how I feel your improving slowly but productivly.
Keep it up!.
I think it is time you start make a new Avtar.

[Soup]

You have improved.

[Scotteh]

  Thank you everyone!!!!

@Skurwy: I found it in the lineart thread here or on PJ, can't remember(I have a realy bad memory )

@Rerg1: Thank you for your comment, i might make a new avvy but not sure what to make

@Soup: Thank you

[Skull]

Very nice, I've seen the lines before, and you've taken a very simple approach to this, and it looks really good. Nice work on the teeth.

[Scotteh]

Thanks Skull

Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)

[Larwick]

Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)

AA and/or selout. Also clean up some of the shading, especially on his ears, it's far too randomly placed. Also, i think more definition with the whites would look good.

[Scotteh]

Added AA

[Jamie]

i made a quick edit yesterday, i dont know if it will help.



colours got darkened when saved to png, dont know what else to save in but you get the idea..

[Scotteh]

Thanks Jamie, but I was going for a non-dithered simplistic style but I might make a more detailed style

[Larwick]

I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.

[Scotteh]

  


Is that what you meant?

[Jamie]

I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.

That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

Edit - i put both side by side and colour picked, and some colours are slightly diffrent values but not by alot barely noticeable i thoght (plus could of got changed a bit when saving?)

[Scotteh]

That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

 

[Larwick]

To me it seems you added a colour with a far redder hue in there..

If not, you used the colours more effectively.

[Blick]

He made the outline brown and thus made the colors within the brown outlines seem more brown and perhaps even brighter than with the black outline.