Call girl

[Fool]

Could use some help on pose and anything else.=)

[gliding]

on the skin i think you should tak out one of those buffer shades. she'd look so much better

on perspective I think you should lengthen and add height to her body. she looks a bit dwarfsh as of yet. :/

other than that its going quite well

[Alex]

whore.

[Fool]

on perspective I think you should lengthen and add height to her body. she looks a bit dwarfsh as of yet. :/

I'm afraid this not an option, I fully get sprite heights limits,  she's supposed to look cartoonish. Thanks.
Which shade did you mean?

clr, thank you.=)

[gliding]

probably the 3rd darkest one

[Fool]

probably the 3rd darkest one

Nope, it doesn't work that well. Thanks=)

[Ryona]

I love the look of her. Cute and sexy!

Everything about her is fantastic. My only suggestion would be to make her right arm a little bit longer.



lol. What a title. "Whore!" haha

[Fool]

I love the look of her. Cute and sexy!

Everything about her is fantastic. My only suggestion would be to make her right arm a little bit longer.

Thank you=) (updated)

lol. What a title. "Whore!" haha

Well, that what the character should be. ( I hope it not a really bad word - I'm learning english from my kids=))

[halu]

Her left shoe looks a bit odd, a bit to round IMO.

[pixelaro]

Tried to smooth out her hair a bit since it looked kin do rough compared to the smoothness in other parts of the sprite. added one color.

[pkmays]

Well, that what the character should be. ( I hope it not a really bad word - I'm learning english from my kids=))

Well, to put it in perspective, if I said whore at the dinner table, my mother would slap me and my grandmother would cry. Not a word to throw around casually in a formal setting. "Working girl," "call girl", or simply "prostitute" are better non-offensive choices.

Only thing that bugs me with the actual sprite is the shading around the stomach. It's border-line pillow shaded. There's also some weird blurry thing happening with the right leg.

[Fool]

Well, to put it in perspective, if I said whore at the dinner table, my mother would slap me and my grandmother would cry. Not a word to throw around casually in a formal setting. "Working girl," "call girl", or simply "prostitute" are better non-offensive choices.

Only thing that bugs me with the actual sprite is the shading around the stomach. It's border-line pillow shaded. There's also some weird blurry thing happening with the right leg.

Man...I got to talk to my kids.=)) I'll fix it right now. Thanks. I don't know what I could do about blurring right now - I'll fix it when I get her over actual background and i got yeah with the shading - fix it when I'll get home. Thank you=)

Pixelaro, I like it like that too I had it on a first edit, but in another place they convinced me to fix it - said looks like sausages.  Well, may be mine was.  Thank you for taking your time to edit - i still think to change it back.=)

[buloght]

Hi Fool, I love your work, this piece is looking great. The new dog animation is outstanding.

I do agree with gliding about her looking dwarfish. It's always good to make the legs/lower body of women longer as the upper by some amount. Even if cartoonish, though that may just be me.

I hope you consider completing your dragon, you can't waste what you have there already   

[EDIT]: Could a mod please delete my second message, I wanted to edit but quoted accidentally    ^Done

[EDIT] Thanks.

[Fool]

Hi Fool, I love your work, this piece is looking great. The new dog animation is outstanding.

I do agree with gliding about her looking dwarfish. It's always good to make the legs/lower body of women longer as the upper by some amount. Even if cartoonish, though that may just be me.

I hope you consider completing your dragon, you can't waste what you have there already   

Thanks. I've tried to give her less chest and less stomach area to get longer legs - it just started looking like pixeldoll  which is not what I have in mind. She ought to look sort of cute, sort of funny and a bit vulgar - just an accent perhaps, in game she turn into green lipsy thing. I think I'll redraw concept of her.

I don't know, man - I did that dragon just for practice. Do you want to adopt it and finish? I've got a lot of pix put away for different reasons - mostly lack of skills=)), I'd rather work on those when I got a chance.=)

[Opacus]

Really nice, me liek.
Buloght: "Hi Fool"..that doesn't sound right for some reason
I really like this piece, but the....things around her legs (Sorry, English ain't my native language) look unfinished to me.
Maybe add some lighting?