What do you want, sonny?

[Andy Tran]

 Looks like you've worked hard on the update. Here's my edit to give my suggestions/advice. I tweaked the palette a bit. Added another shade slightly lighter black to use for the aa of features. For portraits, make sure you aa the face's features so it will stand out well. Added the shading for hair. Made the glass have a white highlight to represent shine. You can learn lots more from edits, keep doing that and it'll become a habit.

  

[Delgneith]

Well I made this the other day and should have posted it sooner because now you've already updated and gotten some other edits but here's my edit of it.



Reworked some AA, added a darker color to buffer/AA the black, added a rosey nose for fun and tweaked your colors and some other minor stuff. I'm not sure what's going on with all those lines and stuff. I assume you're going for an old worn out film look but I'm not sure it's working that well.

[Soup]

Thanks alot for the edits, but I really don't want to add another color. Ill try to improve it more.
V4

I liked Delgneith pallete.

[Andy Tran]

 Hey, that's a really cool edit, Delgeneith. Noticed how he made that hue shift.

[Soup]

Hey, that's a really cool edit, Delgeneith. Noticed how he made that hue shift.

This is why i liked his pallete.

[Soup]

Woot, Tremulant edited it again, making it sexy enough to lick. His is on the left, mine is on the right.

[Panda]

Instead of double posting, learn how to use the edit button. And stop trying to bump your thread the whole time.
If people want to comment on it, they will no matter where on the page it is.
Consider it a warning.


About your last update, I think it looks a tad too blocky, esp. the shoulders look awkward. And the AA is blurry.
The shadowed cheek on yours is wrongly placed/highlighted compared to the other one.
I guess you can study Tremulant's edit a tad more and see what fails on yours.
But it's evolving nicely.

[Soup]

I apoligize for that panda.
I will see what I can do in the next edit.

[Soup]

I hate to bump, but this is officially done.

[Terley]

wow this is actually pretty good, you've made some great progress Soup.. haha someone got in trouble with Panda