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Re: [WIP] Island and Sea Landscape

Reply #10 on: August 26, 2018, 04:45:01 pm
Raising the window works!
The original looks strange because of the perspective, I think. The bottoms of the "legs" of the arch both have perspective that suggests a higher camera/horizon, which is why they look a bit strange. Having the centres of the "legs" not descent so much compared to their sides should help create the look of a lower camera.

Nitpick: I don't think you need the dark line on the horizon, it looks cartoony compared to the rest of the art.