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Rpg Character

on: August 05, 2018, 11:58:35 am


This is the main character or a retro rpg im currently making in gamemaker. His name is valen and he has to avenge his fathers death by traveling time and collecting six magic stones to stop an evil corporation. He has one blue eye from him being half star race. His mother is dead too.

Its pretty epic.

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Re: Rpg Character

Reply #1 on: August 05, 2018, 12:08:17 pm
Comments and critique are welcome.

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Re: Rpg Character

Reply #2 on: August 08, 2018, 10:13:55 pm
Epic.

How do you wish to improve this?
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Re: Rpg Character

Reply #3 on: August 09, 2018, 12:07:21 am
Epic.

How do you wish to improve this?

His swords not big enough :(