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Offline Bickot

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Any suggestions for improving my character?

on: May 29, 2018, 01:44:25 am
So I've been drawing heads for a while now, and this is pretty much my first go at drawing a body.



Basically, I wanted to give her a body and this was the end result...



Yeah... It's looks really awkward and rigid. It honestly just looks like a mess to me. So is there anything I can do to make this better?

« Last Edit: May 29, 2018, 01:52:04 am by Bickot »

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Re: Any suggestions for improving my character?

Reply #1 on: May 29, 2018, 01:49:59 am
Your images aren't working. You have to use the URLs of the image (ending in .png, .gif, or whatever image format), not the URL of the webpage they're on.

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Re: Any suggestions for improving my character?

Reply #2 on: May 29, 2018, 01:52:47 am
Alright, thanks! I just fixed it.

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Re: Any suggestions for improving my character?

Reply #3 on: May 29, 2018, 02:18:07 pm
you dont need to upload a bigger image of your drawing, you can upload the orginal size ( i just guess the drawing is scaled bigger)
Her right leg look a bit out of place, and maybe the arms should be a bit longer,
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Re: Any suggestions for improving my character?

Reply #4 on: May 30, 2018, 07:33:37 am
It's always my advice: Do some traditional art time drawing some skeletons.

Copy them as hard as you can, 1:1 line-to-skeleton-bump drawings. Every single fiddly lil bit, best as you can.

After one or two of those I guarantee you're going to have a better eye for what's right and wrong, even if it'll be a bit of a slog.

If nothing else, do it for skulls. Skull structure is HUGE for anything since people will always pick up on if something's wrong with a face vs the rest of the body, aye?
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